The death penalty is the most
severe punishment in the world. It is a controversial issue with a long and
bloody history. More than 60% of the worldwide population lives in countries
where executions take place. The four most populated countries in the world are
the People’s Republic of China ,
India , the United States and Indonesia . All of these areas
enforce the death penalty and are unlikely to abolish it any time soon. Did you
know in 2009 a total of 69 people were publicly beheaded in Saudi Arabia, not
only that but in the United States about 13,000 people have been legally
executed since colonial times. Thus capital punishment should be abolished
because it is immoral, the issue of inadequate legal representation and the threat
of executing an innocent person.
The
action of taking another person’s life is widely considered immoral and against
human rights. Let’s take a look at the 1992 Robert Harris case, the State of California murdered a
man. With much fanfare, law enforcement officials strapped him into an airtight
torture chamber and slowly pumped in cyanide gas until he was dead. Under
common law the killing of another human being is justifiable only in
self-defense. At the time of his execution though, Robert Harris was
incarcerated, unable to threaten anyone. And still the State of California murdered him,
in a manner so gruesome that it has been banned in warfare since 1925 (H.Hersch,
1992). Isn’t this the same as murder? In fact according to the Universal
Declaration of Human Rights Article 3, “Everyone has the right to life, liberty
and security of person” As a matter of fact many victim’s families rejects the
use of death penalty, using an execution to try to right the wrong of their
loss is an affront to them and only causes more pain. For example, Bud Welch's
daughter Julie was killed in the Oklahoma
City bombing in 1995. Although his first reaction was
to wish that those who committed this terrible crime be killed, he ultimately
realized that such killing "is simply vengeance and it was vengeance that
killed Julie....Vengeance is a strong and natural emotion, but it has no place
in our justice system." Some people might argue our first instinct is to
inflict immediate pain on someone who wrongs us, the standards of a mature
society demand a more measured response. The emotional impulse for revenge is
not a sufficient justification for invoking a system of capital punishment,
with all its accompanying problems and risks. Our laws and criminal justice
system should lead us to higher principles that demonstrate a complete respect
for life, even the life of a murderer. Encouraging our basest motives of
revenge, which ends in another killing, extends the chain of violence (Michigan State University ,
2000).
Perhaps
the most important factor in determining whether a defendant will receive the
death penalty is the quality of the representation he or she is provided.
Almost all defendants in capital
cases cannot afford their own attorneys. In many cases, the appointed attorneys
are overworked, underpaid, or lacking the trial experience required for death
penalty cases. There have even been instances in which lawyers appointed to a
death case were so inexperienced that they were completely unprepared for the
sentencing phase of the trial. Other appointed attorneys have slept through
parts of the trial, or arrived at the court under the influence of alcohol. In
the words of Supreme Court Justice Ruth
Bader Ginsburg, “I have yet to see a death case among the dozens coming to the
Supreme Court on eve-of-execution stay applications in which the defendant was
well represented at trial…People who are well represented at trial do not get
the death penalty.” In Washington
state, one-fifth of the 84 people who have faced execution in the past 20 years
were represented by lawyers who had been, or were later, disbarred, suspended
or arrested. Overall, the state's disbarment rate for attorneys is less than 1%
(Seattle Post-Intelligencer, Aug. 6-8, 2001). Other examples such as an
investigation by the Chicago Tribune, 12% of those sentenced to death from
1976-1999 were represented by, "an attorney who had been, or was later,
disbarred or suspended--disciplinary sanctions reserved for conduct so
incompetent, unethical or even criminal that the state believes an attorney's
license should be taken away." An additional 9.5% inmates, "have
received a new trial or sentencing because their attorneys' incompetence
rendered the verdict or sentence unfair, court records show" (Armstrong
& Mills, 1999).
Once
an inmate is executed, nothing can be done to make amends if a mistake has been
made. There is considerable evidence that many mistakes have been made in
sentencing people to death. According to Michigan
State University
and Death Penalty Information
Center , Since 1973 at
least 88 people have been released from death row after evidence of their
innocence emerged. During the same period of time, over 650 people have been
executed. Thus for every seven people executed we have found one person on
death row who never should have been convicted. If this keeps on going we are
naively imposing the death penalty to innocent people based on inaccurate
reasons.
So
from this entire data what have we found? We have found that capital punishment
is against human rights plus the large influence which the legal representation
has is unjust considering the lower income class, lastly there’s the issue of
innocence. There is no credible evidence that capital punishment deters crime,
so why support it?
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References :
- Filip, S. (2011, 04 06).
Statistics on capital punishment. Retrieved from
http://filipspagnoli.wordpress.com/stats-on-human-rights/statistics-on-capital-punishment/
- Michigan State
University . , & Death
Penalty Information Centre, (2000). Arguments for and against the death
penalty. Retrieved from http://deathpenaltyinfo.msu.edu/
- Armstrong, K., & Mills, S.
(1999, 11 15). Inept defenses cloud verdict. Chicago Tribune
- Inadequate legal
representation. (2001, 08 14). Retrieved from http://www.deathpenalty.org/article.php?id=83
- H.Hersch, M. (1992, 04 24).
Death penalty cannot be justified with arguments. The Tech. Retrieved from
http://tech.mit.edu/V112/N22/hersch.22o.html
Certain carelessness in punctuation and sentence structures weakened the introduction. Good use of various introduction techniques. The next step to improve upon the introduction would be to use those techniques to lead on to the thesis statement. The conclusion is still relatively weaker and rushed.
ReplyDeleteThe first main point on 'immoral' is in fact largely based on 'rights' - which may be a better choice of key word. The paragraph is quite well substantiated, although the topic sentence lacks a strong focus, which might have pushed the discussion to an even higher level.
The paragraph on 'representation' is an example of having a strong topic and focus. The topic is very well selected and the good focus helps to build a very strong paragraph.
The paragraph on wrongful execution pales in comparison to the 2 other content paragraphs. This does not only affect the distribution of the weight of the article, but potentially cause the reader to formulate a less favourable impression of the article than he would as a whole, if that paragraph did not exist.